We all have a notion, some few,
many un-ideal, yet it’s for our own.
We stumble, even fall, but there is
always room to grow.
We hear, we seek times sweet symphonies.
On trails short or long, we hit mountains
or even downhill slopes. Wonder in
delicate thoughts, tender steps to take.
Sunsets seen, words learnt and spoken,
hearts founded. All have faked a smile,
some even a tear. No-ones flawless,
not even the kind. All hoping for happiness.
For tell me now, what is eternal happiness?
We live our lives, tending to be near enough
the same for us each and every day, in and out,
give or take. Do we not all yearn for something
different?
We meet peoples wants, learn to forgive,
there to comfort in hours of needs.
What more do we want, what will
fill us whole, what gives us happiness?
I'm not lukewarm, are you?
Author notes
Option 2- lukewarm
Err yeah this happened... Hmm.
A contest entry
- Seven Sensational Options!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
650 points, ended November 19, 2008, 26 entries
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yeah i like it.
just human nature to always want more..
and not until we know ourselves will we know how to really be happy.
much love,
oldschool
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Ta... Yes indeedy!
<3
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Hmmm, I like how this is kind of a different take, not the obvious that would go along with the title. It's kind of like a stream of consciousness, in a way.
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oh wow this is amazing. i love it. i hope u win the contest!!
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Ahaha thanks
Didn't really like this write of mine, all just came out in a bit of a hurry from my thoughts. And i could edit and improve it alot if i felt like it but i don't :/ it was just random trailing thoughts. But i am glad you enjoyed it! -
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u didnt like it!?!? wow. i dont noe how much more awesome it could get lol
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Really?! But the flow of it is really rubbish, and i don't think i put into words all that well. Ahah i should get you to read my poems more often if you think this =D ahah.
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lol ur crazi
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