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Goodbye

Disapear
Vanish
Leave
Gone

Goodbye,
A simple word,
That is so strong.

Goodbye to addictions
Goodbye to love
Goodbye to people
Goodbye to hate.

Sometimes it's good,
Sometimes it painful.

It can be hard but the right thing,
or hard and the wrong thing.

Easily done but not easily lived with.

Goodbye.

One meaning
yet many feelings.

No one can specifically define goodbye.
But everyone can feel it in all it's forms.

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  • well done. this is very good


  • Great Cthulhu
    December 27, 2008
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    Nice

    A wonderful outline of the many forms of farewell, well done! Thanks for playing along!


  • Katie Lazette
    November 2, 2008
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    A wonderful poem. You do have talent. Keep on writing.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Oh wow!
    You said it all here my friend.
    Most deffenitly goodbye means one thing but has so many feelings.
    This piece sure shouted out to me.
    And i'm glad you shared it.
    Thanks for entering and good luck.
    -Mandi