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Night

  Night whispers damp stillness into her ear
chilled panic streaks down her spine
rushing throughout her chest 
jolting through her bare legs,

she races with  each step more frightened then the next
she glides through dimly lit alleys like a leaf lost in a storm
night, chuckles as he flirts with her shadow,

he comes closer, whisking around her ear, she can still feel
the warm damp chill of his breath as she flees  he steals  the warmth  from her gasping lips, he calls from deep within her all the emotions she  had locked away, he beckoned he demanded, his call ricocheted throughout her as he tempted the braille on her skin 
causing her to quake,she could go no further, she collapsed against a wall  under a light
of golden cream to sweet for the night, around the world she ran and now her eyes finally opened causing the night step back in beloved fear....his day has come to chase him away



to be continued

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  • Walk-Free
    November 3, 2008

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    please tell me when you have completed this poem. it says you're not finished with it.

    do remember to place your option in your AN.

    thanks