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Death without goodbye

The pale sun rises within a mournful sky
A light no longer needed for our place to see
grieving silence of misfortune
leaves a powerful taste for regret
for just one moment I had to step out
and their was your death without goodbye

Years of memories
months of tears
You fighted on though one of our worst fears
your the candle that can never be re lit
your that piece of jigsaw that is forever lost
because I had to take a phone call
within your last moments you passed away

Death without goodbye.......

Now the coldest of winters never chills my soul
I always mourn the first sunrise of the day
because that's the moment when my heart got torn away

 

 

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is so sad yet so beautiful...

    Tragic & heartbreaking yet flows with elogance & grace in a cacophany of raw emotion...
    I couldn't help but be moved by such a touching & compelling write...
    Well penned, well versed, well done!!!