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Eternity

I search through each day
knowing we will meet, again.
You are my past,
my future,
my eternity.
Time passes slowly
when we're apart.
In my heart,
I know your out there.
My dreams tell me
your only a heartbeat away,
still I wait.
Our past lives have brought us
to this point, once again.
Just one of many lives,

we'll share together.
We were meant to be
through all time
so I will wait,
Knowing the paradise

that awaits me

in your arms
once again,
forever...
is our past
our future,
our eternity.



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  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    Beautifully Inscribed!

    This is such a wonderfully expressed piece here Cayla, you did an awesome job with this one indeed! I enjoy reading your poetry, and I wish you all the best in all you do, with life and love, as well as this contest!

    Your AP Dad, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Ryan79
    November 3, 2008
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    I love it!

    It just makes me feel good. It's so full of emotion. Really beautiful poem.


  • blondone
    November 3, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This smooth and calming write touches the heart from the start a imagery that stands out as the words are read most most beautiful write from a beauiful writer


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Beautiful, well-crafted write...good take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

    Vito

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, Josie

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