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Searching for Mr. Tweeks

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It has been a difficult two weeks.
She has been searching for Mr. Tweeks.
Her adored little pupper
Has not been home for supper;
And she's had an itch between her cheeks.

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  • JinSays gold member
    November 6, 2008
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    LOL
    jin


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 7, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting. I had not done a limerick in ages. Before I wrote poetry, they were all I ever did. Once I got here, I was told I had no business writing them and that I didnt know what I was doing, so I stopped. I am glad you found it funny.

      Mike


  • superchargedprincess
    November 4, 2008

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    Love the funnies you've written! The dog looks more like a rabbit to me... do you see it? LOL


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 4, 2008
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      Thank you very much. I appreciate the comment. I wish I had thought of it. It would have made a funnier poem.

      Mike


  • pinkink
    November 3, 2008
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    He He He, cute. Great take on the prompt!


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 4, 2008
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      Thank you very much. I appreciate you reading and commenting. I used to write limericks alot.

      Mike


  • liltandrhyme silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Congrats on the HM, great take on the contest prompt!

    PJ


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Congratulations on the HM, I love what you did with the cartoon...very funny limerick.

    All the best...Sue


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    LOL great


  • Rclane gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    LOL even better. Love the itch line...congrats and well done.


  • SilentInsanity
    November 2, 2008
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    Lmao I have to say this is a very good piece. Very enjoyable!


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you for reading and commenting. It has been a long time since I tried a hand at a limerick on AP.

      Mike


  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Well done, Mike! This is one of my favorite cartoons! Congrats on the HM!


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I have always liked the cartoon. Though the version I am familiar with was drawn by Larsen.

      Mike


  • Re-invention silver member
    November 2, 2008
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    lmao!awww i needed this kind of smile... nicely done I enjoyed it


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed this and that I could bring a smile to your face. Thank you for reading and commenting.

      Mike


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    November 2, 2008
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    Nice one woodchuckers
    All the best in the contest


  • hitthispuppy
    November 2, 2008

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    Hmm!

    interesting, Oh...I get it. ...difficult ...weeks,,,tweeks,...cheeks. I hope she washes her hands before dinner.
    (the cartoonist's name is on the upper left on the wall in the cartoon)


  • Leonura
    November 2, 2008

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    oi, now that would be an ich that would need scratchin' eh? what a lively poem. cute and short. wonderfully written. good luck to ye in yer contest.


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my limerick. I have always loved the picture. I could not let this contest pass me by.

      Mike


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    LMAO Love the limerick. Poor puppy, and poor old lady..two weeks huh? ouch lol Well done!!


  • Panicked-Puppet-xXx
    November 2, 2008
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    Funny and Cute...

    I like it, it brightened up my day. It is funny and cute, yet I wish there was more. Great job...


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I have more humorous ones in a list on my page if you are interested. Take care and thanks for stopping by.

      Mike


  • cant stop myself
    November 2, 2008

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    I feel real sorry for Mr.Tweeks, and the lady better see the Doctor for a good laxitive since she hasn't gone in over 2 weeks. But then I guess that's another story huh. Really good piece.


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I have not written a limerick in ages. Before I started writing poetry on here, it is the only verse I wrote.

      Mike


  • DeSiBoO14
    November 2, 2008

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    hAhAhA!!dIs Is HeLLa FuNNy!!I wAs KiNdA sAd b4 I rEaD dIs BUt NoW iM lAuGhIn My Ass Off!!Da PiC wAs WoW!!lUvD dA wOrDs 2!!HaHaHaHa!! GrEaT jOb!!


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed it. It felt good to write something short and funny for a change. Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Mike


  • Cyanide Milkshake
    November 2, 2008

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    LOL. i've seen this pic before but i cant remember where. Maybe a card or something. Anyway, great limerick awful thought though lol.


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed the poem. The first time I saw this it was a Larsen cartoon. I can't make out the name of the guy that drew this one.

      Mike


  • Wolfdog silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Superb

    That's a real cute one, I'll bet that children will love it. A very good write, as usual. Thanks for sharing it with us.


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      I am glad you enjoyed it. Limericks were all I originally wrote and I put clean one in the kids birthday cards every year.

      Mike

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