Angel wings gold and white
Soaring far, far from sight
Guided and glowing into the world
Where does she land, where does she go?
Angel wings are not always white
Fire and burning, falling to the earth
Blinded and bound to the one she loves
What in this path will be set to the truth?
Angel wings in blinded ways
Look to the stars, you will be okay
She soars to high to fall to the ground
Who in this world will here that sound?
Angel wings glitter with soul
Find her kneeling at the alter
Her soul is open and bare
What does she do to make him understand she cares
A contest entry
- Rock My World…Take Me Too All Limits by Debbie Hansman.
600 points, ended November 9, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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As I read this...I found a soft touch to it...as the Angel is reaching for something.
I like these words:
"Her soul is open and bare
what does she do to make him understand she cares"
Thank you for entering & Good luck!
debbie
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