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Like Mother Nature

You light days,
where flowers praise your name,
from the warming heart of Winter;

  You are the song,
  that mellows the ice
      and captivates birth,
   new lungs to the breeze;

that sensual lullaby
 where skirts,

      skip through fields
laughing in the pollen
 where I've counted petals
that will always speak of love;

      you've nurtured their souls
        with kisses in the wind
              and smiles on sun-light.

I could speak of such beauty
but never captivate who
                         you are,


as such splendor is found rare
 in the brooklet's blossom.

This tree swaying
a home to more life
than meets the eye

[ you are one more hand
    that is unknown,
    to grip a smile of help ]

And forever
I wish I could dream back on when
I would sing the Sky's song
             and kiss the ground
when I thought of him;

but alas

you remind me there are better times
                    

                     when I see you smile.

Author notes

dedicated to solitarytear, hope you are okay, i think you are a really sweet person, so stay cheerful


this bg was not made by me, but someone else on ap, if anyone knows please tell me, so i may credit them.

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  • Empathy Reborn
    November 10, 2008

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    wow... awesome! i wish i was one of those people who could actually give you some constructive criticism, but sadly.... amazing write! love ya steph, keep it up


  • solitarytear
    November 5, 2008

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    wow

    speechless........that was beyond words.......(i'm gonna keep you i think) hehehe....that was wonderful sweet girl and i'm honored.....huggs you.....and tucks you into my pocket for safe keeping


  • JustsimplyKatiee.
    November 2, 2008

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    Yer soo pretty [:

    Okai yew know how people leave really long Comments? I mean it's just like so not nessary. Cause it'll go on forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and everand ever and ever and everrrrrrrr. I mean who wants to sit there and read someone's Comment that is pointless? Not me of course. I mean how hard is to put the truth in a simple senteces or two? Honestly... Haha.
    x[[♥]]x


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A LOVELY AND VERY SWEET WELL WISH!!!

    I am sure your sweet and touching words will bring a smile to their face.'s


  • John Dillinger
    November 2, 2008
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    Yeah...

    Nuff said!


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    November 2, 2008
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    This is sweet and happy. =) Its a nice dedication. <3 Good luck in the contest!


  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Awwww this is a sweet poem for someoone you care about. I think you did a great job, I love you and good luck in the contest.


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 2, 2008

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    Seeeee Steph,
    You wrote a happy poem, and now you be happy too young lady, SMILE
    Thanks for the entry my friend

    SMILE SMILE SMILE

    Ken

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