He immerses his soul in infectious moonlight
Within the ecstasy of an ebony night
Searching
His pale skin glistens in her milky rapture
Tranquilized, his body continously craves the creature
Discover
Through the hush of the night, her whispers travel to him
The echoes of her voice harmonize with cyptic darkness
Relinquish
Bare flesh vital to eachothers orgin
Devour the turmoil roused within eachothers core
Vitality
He immerses his soul in infectious moonlight
Within the ectasy of an ebony night
Searching
A contest entry
- sensual vignettes by adsaige.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can see the contrasts about them...The repetition of the ending works pretty well, overall, I like the way you've done this poem. Thank you for your entry.
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