Lately I've been thinkin' bout you a whole lot
And I cain't seem to git you off my mind
I cain't keep asking you to forgive me
And I cain't keep lookin' over yore mistakes
I see you leanin' like yore 'bout to fall
I refuse to be that mistake you regret
I keep tryin' so hard to turn away
But somethin' keeps pullin me back
And I ain't sure what it is
I'm better as a memory
Or better yet somethin' you forget
Than somethin' you try to keep
I wana say I'm sorry for all I done did wrong
But I cain't bend my pride to do it
Gawd damn it just feel so dang wrong
I must look just like a damn fool
Standin' here lettin' you go
Why cain't you just be gone
I'm leavin' this is my goodbye
I ain't doin' this no more
I ain't goin' to make you cry again
We just ain't goin' to work
Darlin' you know it's true as anythang
So don't spill a single tear
It ain't goin' ta make me stay
This is for the best
Gawd knows I love you but I cain't keep this up
Ain't nothing on this earth goin' to help us
We cain't make it through
And honey, this is all for you
Author notes
This is written in dialect..how I talk. My accent is init best it cain b to add effect..hope yall like it if not git ovr it lol
What do you think yall?
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Babe...who...what...who and what is this about??
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Its about just what it says..the hoplessness of love
and its about someone....that doesnt really matter.....its fine
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No..I cant let it go..if this is hurting you then its hurting me.....
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oooo myyy godd!!Great write ya!! Totally love the 2nd stanza:
I keep tryin' so hard to turn away
But somethin' keeps pullin me back
And I ain't sure what it is
I'm better as a memory
Or better yet somethin' you forget
Than somethin' you try to keep
Simply awesome. Can relate a lot to the 3rd stanza. Nice flow and nicely penned poem. Keep writing ya! Cheers!!
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This flows really well, I love it.
The emotion is, of course, felt and received well by the reader.
What a touching write.
Makes a person think.
I'm leavin' this is my goodbye
I ain't doin' this no more
I ain't goin' to make you cry again
We just ain't goin' to work
Darlin' you know it's true as anythang
So don't spill a single tear
Tee hee, I really like that part.
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LOL thanks. Yea I like that stanza thangy too lol.Its kinda just..idk..more in your face then the rest of it but it aint in a bad way at all....kinda like ya kno im sorry..but go away lol
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