when the mirror reflects back at me
what do i see
someone who has glazed over eyes
someone who lives in a world with to many secrets and lies
inside he is ugly and no one can see it
i am not fit
to be standing here
always living in fear
i just want to be someone
who hasn't done the things I've done
Author notes
gazzarath option 3 **heartbrokenheadcase*
A contest entry
- First contest,Four options, i'll love you forever if you enter? by Jaffa-.
560 points, ended November 11, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Perfect. The rhyme is flawless. The last line really stands out and sums up the poem briliantly. well done and good luck.
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I really liked the first two lines and you started off very powerful. It rhyms beautifully untill the 6th line? and hen it caries on rhyming beautifully. It's just the 6th lines doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem? Good luc
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