My heart
is tangled with desires
a fight I know I will never win
Chestnut eyes burn
deepening into my souls flesh
An old, familiar feeling
fondles emotions
long trapped within
it's chest
Gravity
now lost
I crave the nectar of your love's fruit
as my knees begin to melt
starved lips fold over mine~
I've lost again
Author notes
I chose the title: There Was That Kiss
A contest entry
- Seven Sensational Options!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
650 points, ended November 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good imagery.
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Love the way you describe a kiss like you describe honey a sweet nectar and I definately believe that with someone special, that is exactly how it feels like. Some beautiful metaphors here.
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I love it! Wonderfully well expressed.
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What a lovely description of a kiss, beautifully done here
C
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I love the chestnut eyes...and
"starved lips fold over mine~"
this is very sensual - I feel the sense of desire in this muchly!
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Wow
Now that's a kiss!
Joe
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What a beautiful overwhelming kiss that sounds like. Stunning write!
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I think that this is amasing
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