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Forsaken

purged coat of arms left threadbare
alone by fingers wrought of despair
orphaned to a weeping willows sigh
lost within a world of goodbyes

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    What a powerful last line! I was so drawn into that line I didn't realise I had tears in my eyes til one fell onto my cheek

    Wonderfully penned!
    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    thumbs up

    desolation