Samhain and been and gone. I tumbled into my flat, and collapsed on the sofa worse the wear for drink. Absinthe always played tricks on my mind. At least I thought I was in my flat, and asleep.
I awoke to a lapping sensation between my thighs. My skin felt tight and sticky. I looked and saw a female shape encased in a scarlet rubber. I must be dreaming, rubber and a dame waking me up with her mouth on my shaft… wasn’t I a girl when I went to sleep! I closed my eyes in disbelief. That only intensified the sensation of those ruby lips sucking down on my erection.
Opening my eyes all I could see and feel was her mouth engulfing me as my new manhood got harder and started to throb. The tightness on my skin, a black rubber sheath held me down, I wasn’t fighting anyway I was getting to like the feel of a blow job this way. I could do nothing but watch the red hood of her head pumping up and down on my groin.
I felt a knot forming at the top of my legs… hell I had balls too! The sensations were now crazy but I couldn’t deny I liked them. The dame’s skinny fingers grasped my sac and squeezed, oh lord I knew I was going to shoot in her mouth. Alternatively, I would have if she hadn’t squeezed again, this time so hard I went dizzy and passed out.
A sudden noise made me start, and in my haze, I decided the rubber trip had been a wild dream. I still checked, a feel between my legs told me I was a girl again, no extra things dangling where they shouldn’t be. What a relief I didn’t have to stand up for a pee. As my eyes cleared, I noticed my front room had gone. What was going on and where was I?
Then I saw them. Two people engaging in oral sex in what was once my front room. Least I thought it was oral sex. The girl was kneeling and she had her mouth open as if waiting for him to use it. He looked a right character dressed in black, while the poor woman was freezing her ass off butt naked. I didn’t dare make a sound; he wasn’t the sort to mess with.
No, it wasn’t oral sex, no one cries when doing a blow job and she was sobbing her heart out. He was stood there peeing, not on the floor but on her. My head was spinning. I was dreaming all my secret fetish desires tonight. But it was so real not like a dream.
I looked over again as he told her to clean him. I swear as she went to work on his piece he was looking straight at me. Something wasn’t right. In my fuzzy state, I couldn’t work out what. Those eyes pierced me, those eyes… those eyes weren’t there! What the hell was going on?
Before I could work it out he was moaning and grabbed her hair; thrusting into her mouth. The words he used at her were degrading as he forced her to take every inch of his tool into her mouth before grunting and pulling out so he ejaculated over her face.
The scene then faded or I did, back into my unconsciousness, no doubt. My dreams filled with images of Mark, my sexy bloke. Images of him and me in rubber and golden showers. I knew these were dreams, Mark wasn’t like that.
It didn’t feel like I slept long before I came to again. I was wary this time and kept my eyes shut, just listening. All I could hear was the wind in the trees. As I opened my eyes it dawned on my brain, what trees, I lived on the ninth floor; how the crap could I hear trees?
My comfortable room was now a forest clearing. The freak with no eyes had gone but the girl was there. This time she was sucking and licking the foot of woman sat on stone table. A naked male knelt beside her going down on the woman’s other foot. Both of them wore collars attached to chain leashes. The woman loved the worship of her feet and I could see it was pleasure for the two giving it.
Still I wanted to get out of here, and tried to move but couldn’t, my dream was holding me here. Least I hope it was dream. This was getting freaky. The male stood up and started walking towards me. Well if they didn’t know, I was there before they did now. He had left his head behind still sucking her feet… my scream would have woken the dead. I wanted out and out now and then... nothing, I passed out again.
I woke up feeling sticky. A sweet taste dripping in my mouth… honey! I was laid flat out on a cold surface covered in honey and something else, something odd. I opened my eyes; slices of fruit were arranged all over me. Up my legs were thin slices of peach, over my belly segments of orange, my breasts had a bra of plum slices with an arrangement of cherries over my nipples. Then the male from my last dream appeared, this time with his head.
I screamed and screamed, he said nothing, just created whirls of cream around my groin. Then he placed pineapple rings between my legs, a tunnel to my sex so to speak. Slowly he pushed bananas into the tunnel and I winced knowing that soon one would penetrate me.
Sure enough the cold fruit reached my opening and them another pushed it upward and another. I just wanted to die, maybe I would. Then the voice of the girl called, ‘Master’s guests are ready for dessert.’
As they wheeled me to the table I knew ‘Master' would be the eyeless freak, I was wrong. The woman in red rubber stood at the head of the table, I still couldn’t see her face, but I remembered her lips. The freak was a dinner guest along with the woman who liked her feet washed.
I wanted this dream to end, I wanted to wake up. I wanted to be back in my flat. I didn’t want this. I didn’t…
Author notes
An erotic take on an old fashioned ghost story
Fetishes used: Rubber, watersports, feet, food
Just in time to celebrate Halloween or Celtic Festival of Samhain,
OK guys,
This is the last round before we get to the final round. All points earned are crucial.
You will be writing a story this time around.
I will first let you all know that you have each chosen your own challenges this round.
Each of you chose a number from 1-7
That number belongs to your particular scenario that you are writing about so therefore;
#1 is BDSM and Luckynsincere chose number 1, so she will be writing about a BDSM scene. Below you will find the list and it's number along with who chose it.
1...................BDSM......................Luckynsincere
3...................swingers..................Riftkin
4...................Pony play.................Tattboy
5...................orgy......................Noonithewitch
6...................fetish....................DLC-Jem
7...................roleplay..................glasyalabolas
Number 2 was never chosen.
The second number that you guys picked was from 3-9;
This number is the number of people that are going to be involved in your scenarios. For example Glasyalabolas chose #4, so there should be 4 people in his scenario. Below you will find the list of who chose what number.
3.........................Luckynsincere
4.........................Glasyalabolas
5.........................Tattboy
6.........................DLC-Jem
7.........................Riftkin
8.........................Noonithewitch
I also asked you to pick a costume ball (with a costume) or dinner party (and holiday), there was 1 that chose dinner party.
DLC-Jem chose dinner party and the holiday Sambain
Those of you that opted for a costume ball (and costume) are;
Riftkin.........................french maid
Glasyalabolas...................medieval knight
Luckynsincere...................Juliet
Noonithewitch...................witch
Tattboy.........................Dick Turpin
So in the end to make this less confusing....lol
Poet............scenario..............#of ppl.........costume/holiday
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Costume Ball~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Riftkin........swingers...............7............french maid
Glasyalabolas....roleplay.............4............medieval knight
Luckynsincere....BDSM.................3............Juliet
Noonithewitch.....orgy................8............witch
Tattboy..........pony play............5............Dick Turpin
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Dinner Party~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
DLC-Jem...........fetish..............6............Sambain
If you have questions, feel free to ask. Let's get creative and erotic...every point counts.
The deadline to get your entries in Tuesday Nov. 11
Comments
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wow!
l.o.l. you do know how to tell/write stories lady! mmmm.. love this!
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chuckles, thank you ... pure imagination of course
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Guests for Dinner
This piece tugged hard and though I am not as talented when it comes to story writing. I base on how it makes me feel, how reader friendly it is to digest but most of all- did it have cohesiveness I thoroughly enjoyed the story with its twists also turns What an adventure!! It seems You had a lot of action
While I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: I was able to envision the scenario- This may sound wild but it felt like a *virtual reality* where it was hard to discern current state- from dreamstate- wake from sleep. Cool~ leaves the reader wanting more
You had a challenge of incorporating 6 people- and did a fine job for I would have certainly found it difficult myself I chuckled at several parts especially at the *eyeless freak* phrase
and for the record - I will never look at fruit the same way again- especially pineapple rings
This cannibalism feeling set in
but the dark erotic images grabbed and held on~ my Mind cringed at the fruit stuffing to the point of bursting Execution Magnificent
Your flow kept me hanging on that is for sure - Now I digest reads in a different manner than some- energy exuded is a strong factor and the different array of emotions You presented-Well done
** Just a note: this one section I wanted to get Your take on it for the verbage in this line stopped me~
(Samhain and been and gone)
Just a thought- for some reason the first *and* threw me a loop- Maybe wording- Samhain- been and gone *or* Samhain had come and gone
Also~ I am strange but this line-
(No, it wasn’t oral sex, no one cries when doing a blow job and she was sobbing her heart out. He was stood there peeing, not on the floor but on her. My head was spinning.)
...He was stood there peeing...
...He stood there peeing... - just a thought
I won't write a novel of a comment this time but in summary
Magnificent story entered ~
Challenge Matrix:
spelling/grammar/punctuation- 16
presentation/creativity- 20
how well you handled the challenge-20
"grab me" effect (how much did we enjoy reading this piece)- 20
overall-20
For a total of 96 points
Sensual images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Hope to read more...
Best wishes to You in the challenge Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This was incredibly hot and I wanted more. Why did you stop when you did - not fair! That fits though as you are quite dominant! On to the scores for ya then:
Spelling/punctuation/grammar= 18 (Just a few small issues here)
Presentation/ creativity=20
How well you handled the challenge=20
Grab me effect=20
overall=19
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And as any dominant will tell you, who ever said we had to be fair... grins
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*sighs* why do people cut off their stories when it is going very good. this really held my attention and imgaination. this story was different and you did a wonderful job.
there were some problems with punctation that did distract a bit from the reading.
spelling/punctation= 18
presentation=20
how well you handled the challenge=20
grab me=20
overall=19
total=97
*if you decide to continue this would you send me the link?* -
Oh my this is some writing by you sis, for good luck.
Riftkin
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Jems m'Lady this is awsome i loved it it was so funny and the ending well that finished it in the right place lol
i love you
xxx your angel xxx
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Wonderful story..a delight to read. I did find it a bit hard to keep track of all the characters though, I am pretty sure all 6 are in there somewhere..lol
Spelling/ grammar/ punctuation: 18
There are quite a few spots that need a comma, the flow is kinda off a bit.
Creativity/ presentation: 20
How well you handled the challenge: 20
Grab me effect: 20
I found this to be very enjoyable. It definately grabbed my attention and I did not want to stop..I wish there was more.
Overall: 19
Total:97
**Master Ktulu**
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I'll have word with DLC you never know there could be summat for Thanksgiving or Yule
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It was a sweet nightmare....
I enjoyed...though 'peeing' disturbed me a little bit...
but the structure of the events is fantastic...
and the story moves smoothly, beautifully and erotically...
watering my mouth...
and at times letting myjuices flow...
A lustful attempt with an artistic touch...
Kisses honey!
Gal
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