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don't force me

you buy lotsa food
just to tease me
you say being fat is good
but it doesn't pleases me

no I don't want to eat
you can't just force me
put my life on delete
when you notice,
the fat around my knee

just on more bite, you say
but don't you know?
the food will turn into vomit
cause I CAN say no!

worse worse poem, I know, so just don't comment

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  • Jd17
    November 20, 2008

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    OMG! i so didnt know you had a ED! i do too! from reading my poems I'm sure you see why! lol This one is amazing! i know how you feel. I love the control, the feeling of relief afterwards. . .beautiful poem, you expressed what i think we all feel


  • black-tears
    November 4, 2008
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    well thank you I thought more anorexic, I don't know anymore.... eating these days is a total disaster, especially to keep up some pretense to keep my mum happy

  • Zannah
    November 2, 2008

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    Its not a bad poem. It shows your feeling. Are you bulimic? I really like this poem, i know what you mean by writing it. ttyl.

    Zannah