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within myself

I took journey
on shores of time
waves beating,
memories recede
come alive next moment,
all my present is this play.

I can't look at now,
past coloring
future beckoning,
essence of life mostly buried
flowing beneath.

what indeed is this life
everlasting search for purpose
bird flies opening wings
thoughts clipped mine
threw me struggling on the floor.

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  • thepoetssoul
    November 8, 2008

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    This is a good entry you have entered.
    Nice imagery and thought provoking indeed.
    thanks for the entry.
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    November 8, 2008

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    Think the last line needs 'the' before floor to have it grammatically correct. We all look for purpose in life. Well done. C


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    thoughts clipped mine.
    again very deepI
    we think excessively and we are not even aware of it, it is the only thing that stands between us and God
    a pleasure as always my friend
    god bless you...


  • Sandal
    November 2, 2008

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    Meditation reveals the paradox of being human - the last stanza describes the flight of ideas and the limit of incarnation. Next time, maybe.