Sue wondered how to tell her Siamese-twin brother
that she not only approved of his engagement...
but she shared his love for his fiancé.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: hamkahatta
One Sentence
A contest entry
- A sentence! by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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haha! What a cool contest and I love your poem!
Best of luck!
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there was no sufficet weight on the line to kick someone in the face with
take a look at the one sentance, the blog site.
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lol, clever take on the picture. What a situation! Just a token one comment for you...so you don't forget that I can!
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such an interestin' situation. would truly make almost any man smile no? lol.
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Nice
i am not surprised
attraction is a beautiful thing -
all things surface sooner or later...some for a breath of air others to feed their hunger
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Cleverly portrayed... x
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this is an interesting situation.. one that I'm sure that she'll find the right words to say.. maybe cross her fingers while she is at it.. btw my suggestion is to re read the first line.. seems to be a typo.. "Sue wondered how the tell her Siamese-twin brother" I do believe that "the" should be "to"
then it sounds better..
great take on the prompt.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Great catch LOL... That's what happens when you're rushed
But that said, thank you Kat...
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