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I Want You

In every sense of the words
You're like a fire that burns deep inside me.
I know I need to wait.
It's hard though.

Whenever we are talking, or looking at eachother.
I know how much you mean to me.
I know it's early, and I know we just met not too long ago.
That's what makes this feeling so crazy.

I don't know how to describe it.
The heart wants what the heart wants.
I want you.
I can't promise that we'll always be together.

I can promise though that I will never find another girl while we're together.
If you give me a chance, I can show you what you mean to me.
I don't want this to end.
I don't want it to be like the past relationships.

I'm tired of the broken promises, the lies.
I just want to be secure in a relationship for once.
I want that with you.
I can't stop thinking about you.

I just want that chance.
To show you I'll be here unless you end it.
To show you I'm not gonna be like all the others.
I'm definitely more mature now than I used to be.

Back then I couldn't stay committed.
Now that's all I do.
I know you are lonely.
I know you are sad.

Let me show you I'm not fake.
I will do whatever it takes to make you realize that.
I'm the one if you want me to be.
I'm always gonna be here unless you push me away.

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  • fluffatron69
    November 2, 2008

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    I didn't feel the vibes from this poem, if I'm honest... For me, it didn't flow. However, it's clear direct style was nice.


  • LovetimesLove
    November 2, 2008

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    Your poem has something so delicate about it that once ingested, it fills the system with such a complete feeling and yet a sense more, digestion comes with a smile. Beautiful.