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Song 1.

I have glimpsed into your inner being

and the beauty exulted me

I have gazed into your eyes for hours seeing-

drowning in the twin pools of mystery

while searching through the deeps

of your soul for what cannot be

described in words...

I have felt the Light surround me

the universe explode around me

my body vibreting with unconditional love

a love that is a part of your soul-

going deep inside my skin and closing

softly around me

hugging me with love...


Your smile is that of an angel

branded on my brow like a kiss

or a symbol of devotion-

I feel your breath on my face

your essence and your strength.

You send sparks of light through my spirit

You sooth my tongue to speak truth

and to help me overcome darkness.

You have replaced your energy

with God's for the sake of healing

my wounded heart.

You have infused me with knowledge

and elevated my desire to explore

higher spirituallity and to love

without guilt or shame because

your dreams are sweet your is love as pure

as the terrible crystal that sets

above the throne of God.

Your eyes are like multicolored lights

reflecting on deep waters bathing me

in the white embrace of holy love.


Like a seraphim whose vision

is perennial -searchlights searching

through dark matter beyond time and space

guiding my spirit softly to the tropical embrace

of promised paradise

such are your eyes...












A book in the making.
To be continued.


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  • I think so far you have done really well! The detail is brilliant and the imagery powerful. Keep up the good work, it's coming along beautifully. Let me know when it is completed, would love to read the end, for the beggining is brilliant. Thanks for sharing, it's a beautiful piece of writing x


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    Keep up the good work

    You are a very good writer and this should keep the reader right on the edge of teir seat .


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Heavenly, each time I read it I get bewitched
    sure a fine book it will be
    Love you


  • moon2u
    November 3, 2008

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    Wow!
    this is an impressive work of art
    you have captured spiritual love
    its glimmering vibrational flow
    its delicate energy

    superb Jally
    applause
    hugs Moony


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Where else will we find truth and love but in the warmth of soul.
    written through he soul
    lovely
    God bless you my friend...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Hugged By Love, Nice.

    Clearly in this journey we search for so many answers to questions, or there are some who may not. But searching is a good way to find indeed, and whenever your sweet soul finds, you reveal with such honesty and beauty. Thanks for sharing, and it's always a pleasure reading you.

    Much love and peace.
    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Humm..well made sketch of the soul while at its depth..I WITNESSED IT ..through the intensity of your words...thanks for such a deep work...

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    Judy

    Another deep masterpeice dear poet. Always that search into the soul and the loss for words. Save from you a master of these writes.

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