The little girl lost inside
The little girl who wont obied
The little girl who feels so small
The little girl once wrapped in a shawl.
Little girl I ask you....
Will you show me the truth?
If I hold your hand tight?
Will you promise to love me ?
And let me show you the light?
The little girl who's screaming in pain
The little girl who never wants to see you again
The little girl fed up with abuse
the little girl who feels mis used
Little girl I ask you....
Will you show me the truth?
If I hold your hand tight?
Will you promise to love me ?
And let me show you the light?
That little girl that I once knew
That little girl doesn't know what to do
That little girl who's name is mine
That little girl will one day shine.
This little girl is me.
Author notes
option 1) - teddy and me pic promt.
option 5)abusive relationship
PREWRITE
very personal poem. about my inner child wanting to be heard. and how they can hide the truth ffrom us. I amm having support work atm and we are exploring my inner child whi is very lost and filled with pain.
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very personal piece of writing here
Comments
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wow!!!!
i really liked this poem...
it had deep meaning... great job!!!
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thanks for the entry
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hey...
an awsome write and can really be related to...thank you for sharing and good luck..
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Pretty amazing. I think that it was a great write, with a great inner message. Best if luck in your contest.
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A strong message, and a nice last stanza! However I wasn't able to make the poem flow whilst reading it, which took away some of its charm... I liked the positive message conveyed in the last few lines. Good luck in the contest!
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This is a heartfelt and beautiful poem here. It really is so important to go back and look at that pain of the little girl inside of you. This is the first step in healing. It is not easy, but I promise it will be worth it in the end. I wish you much peace and great job sharing some very painful feelings here. Blessings, Patty
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