Take Me Away (Pantoum)
Take me away into your dreams
Hand-in-hand we shall fly
To that place with sunset streams
A paradise for you and I
Hand-in-hand we shall fly
Our hearts beating as one
A paradise for you and I
Beyond the crimson setting sun
Our hearts beating as one
O'er mountains and seas we'll go
Beyond the crimson setting sun
There our love will always grow
O'er mountains and seas we'll go
To that place with sunset streams
There our love will always grow
Take me away into your dreams
(C) SnoWryTeR xiaoDan
A contest entry
- the two hearts... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The scenario you created of your love is just very beautiful and touching as well..I loved it..well done...and thanks ..
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