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Over an ocean of love, the wind blows in many directions



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Picture inspired; http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2426/57.jpg?1225625135

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 3, 2008

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    Apt for the picture.
    Congrats on the Bronze.




  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Well put!!!


  • KayJay
    November 2, 2008
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    Clever take... well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a very clever sentence for the picture prompt.
    Good luck in the contest!

    Jeannette


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    The winds blow in all four directions. Catch a wave and take a ride! Wonderful phrasing my friend. Always a pleasure to stop by and read your poetry! ~Sie


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A wonderful line...full of truth and poetic beauty. You do have a way with words. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    and that wind wraps up completely, sometimes catching us unawares.... you write love so well, my friend.

    ~ Nicolette

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