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I AM NOT, at all, LOST IN THE CROWDS


The ever lasting beauty
in sunrise
reminds me of your absence

The fragrance of the flowers
sweeten my heart

The tinkling sounds of water
rewind your conversation style

I am not at  all lost in crowds
and always resound in your heart and soul
while you make my mind spell your name umpteen times
almost like chanting the name of the supreme lord!

While you take rest in your mother's house
I feel restless without your lovable presence
so i feel of you and your smiling face
each and every minute I  breath in.

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6. It is your love that I feel each day of my life.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    I love this very much, thank you for entering my contest.

    Best of luck to you in it.

    Riftkin