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Regret

The one thing
that should have
been said.

Way back when...

The world in spring
was a beautiful place
to be.

Not thinking
the knowledge
to speak
became lost.

For this is
              my regret.

As spring becomes winter
the long road of many paths
remains silently uneven.

I've dranken
healthy waters
my whole life.

Too causious
in my older years
I've become.

I should have thrown
caution to the winds.

My regret...

Author notes

Nope. This is a personal poem.

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  • Rheea gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    You speak as if you were 100 not the young man that you are.


  • Painwarlock
    November 2, 2008

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    wow very deep and it was personal as the notes said lol but it was very aesthetic i loved it keep it up