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Waiting

Come to me by the lamplight and darkened trees,
primeval ecstasy awaits

Author notes

http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489- the beautiful picture which inspired me.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Reading this I thought of a word that sums this up: Majestic

    Lovely poem!
    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008

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    Outstanding

    Awash with mystic. Beautiful background adding such depth to a marvelously written implore.
    Fine job

  • ea silver member
    November 4, 2008
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    very alluring...


  • Painwarlock
    November 2, 2008
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    short but sweet and deep


    • RareFlower
      November 2, 2008
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      thankyou

      Its quite difficult to write something with just 13 words- im glad that it wasnt all just words linked with no meaning/!!! lol
      RF

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