True friendship is an eternal ocean, oblivious to the weather's mockery around it.
Author notes
Had around 10 interpretations, but finally kept this one!!! 
Picture Prompt. Picture by hamkahatta
A contest entry
- A sentence! by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hiback again, just shoing this one to my husband who has just got home, he doesnt normally do poetry but even he likes this and says hi and nice write
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Hi back!
and I am glad he liked this! and you too. Thanks for that very fulfilling comment.
Lencio
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this is really superb, i have a friendship like that you painted it very well, so much with so few words, a challenge, but you rose to it well,
take care littlefishone
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well done...would like to see the other ideas u had though lol, u know, just for the hell of it.
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when i clicked upon this one, i wasn't expecting something as good.
"weather's mockery around it" what a ripe personification man.
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LOL! you liked that one? see my author's notes! that was a hard one, but I am glad you liked it. Thanks so much!
Lencio
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cleverly portrayed... x
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I think you kept the right one Very nicel done and best of luck.
Ken
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WOW!
Super neat sentence, one line poem! great interpretation and wording! Good luck with the contest!
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Awesome thought for this picture
and so true my friend! Well done
and good luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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