You can run, but you can't hide
From the fate that you meet tonight
The Blood that will spill
The head that will roll
And the life that will be claimed
You are tied down
There is nowhere to escape to
Only my waiting blade
And my unbearable bloodthirst
That is waiting to be unleashed
It slices through your cheek
And carves through your stomach
It tears through your arms
And rips through your legs
And this is just the beginning
My knife makes a deep hole
As the blood flows out
Your corpse falls to the floor
But I am not satisfied
I want more!
I grab your limbless body
And bite its ear off
I tear off it's clothes
And fuck the bloody mess
The come, mixing with your blood
My work here is done
The blood is flowing out of your body
Your eyes, looking at me with no emotion
A bleeding rainbow of one single color
The dark color of crimson
You must give some credit though
I am an artist
My murders are my portraits
Their screams are my music
And their heads are my collection
Author notes
I had a bit of a challange keeping to the word prompts, but I am happy with the end results.
A contest entry
- Battle of My Favourites. by November-Dani.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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aaaah! great once again!
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Beautiful write...
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Love it. Great job with the word bank.
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Some these words, are just amazingly piece together "Your eyes, looking at me with no emotion
A bleeding rainbow of one single color
The dark color of crimson" && the last lines were amazing "I am an artist
My murders are my portraits
Their screams are my music
And their heads are my collection" ... Very talented writer indeed
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whoa this an amazing piece you write really well!
"My knife makes a deep hole
As the blood flows out
Your corpse falls to the floor
But I am not satisfied
I want more!"
congrats on the silver you deserved it
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You certainly write in the same style as Dani. I'm pretty sure thats exactly what she was looking for so good luck. It's a really chilling, graphic, horrific story. Just the sort of thing I enjoy.
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This isn't the sort of stuff i like reading at all, but you kept my interest and told a chilling story, so well done. There's no doubt that Dani loves it =)
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haha, thanks KyleBerg. I appreciate it. Its kind of hard to belive that im actually a really happy person in real life, lol.
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once again an awesome poem josh!! keep up the awesome writing!!
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MAN I love this.
I can honestly say that you are my favourite writer on AP. I love your work.
This is fantasticly written, you interpreted the words fantasticly, the poem flows well and it conveys lots of emotion. I absolutly love your work. Thank you so much for entering.
Dani.
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