approval

I pause
as twilight's costume
cloaks Spring's breath.

Yet I still feel
the fragrance left behind
and the scent of you
as together we are woven
amongst the stars.

Lunar's heart
blesses us with her
consenting grace.

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Prompt: waiting for the moon
30-40 words

A contest entry

30-40 words of Brilliance #28 by AutumnGypsy. 550 points, ended November 6, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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AutumnGypsy
November 6, 2008

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This is a lovely take on the prompt. You left me with a lingering thought and it was gorgeous. Best to you in the contest

katzeyez
November 6, 2008
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Thank you for your lovely comment.
Katz xx

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