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Use somebody

Im sick of this
All of this
Yet i keep on digging myself further in
Why the fuck am i doing this?
I am ready to give in
I just want it to go away
To disappear and hide its face among a sea of stars
To never be seen or heard of again
Ever.
Please let me go from this
Run from this
Because I'm sick of this
Sick and Tired
Lonely
Empty
Unaware of my actions
Mist in mind
I am a pure soul
Looking for something to latch on to
Nothing is extended my way
Only mere twigs and broken bruised limbs.
Reach out as I pass over them
Leave me be if this is all you have to offer
For I could not be pushed into such matters
Let me go from this
Your a star and I am the sea
To never meet
just passerbys.

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Very emotionally penned! Well done! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • AngelxXxDust
    November 2, 2008
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    I love the way you have a passion for your writing, it goes together wonderfully