Eyes sowed shut and blind unable to see.
Lost feelings that can be seen.
Joy and sorrow words and feelings that work together.
Night as black as eyes that went blind.
Eyes that seem to get lost in time.
Eyes once bright as day are now cold as night.
Eyes sown shut trying to pop open to see the truth.
Eyes that are afraid of seeing.
Eyes that are afraid of the truth.
Eyes sown shut and blind as can be.
Question is do you want to see?
A contest entry
- Blow me away with "POEMS" by thepoetssoul.
4250 points, ended November 8, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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This is a nice piece of poetry here.
Its an interesting piece for sure.
Thanks for the entry.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Interesting, I am not a fan of repetition for it becomes wearisome, some different metaphors for each one makes a piece far more interesting. C
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I like the question at the end, it brings as eerie feel to the poem...
great job honey!!
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