Come to me sweetly
take my angelic lure
and give yourself
completely
to my woman child charms
a face deceptively lovely ...
I
...am your Angel
Let me hold you
mesmerized in arms
seemingly innocent
of all fraud
Close your eyes
breath deeply
and relax ...
I
...am your Angel
Let down your guard
and open your soul to me
But be prepared to bleed
For I will
Suck
You
Dry
leaving you
Empty
Hollow
And you will
Never truly
See me coming
I am disguised as Love
I
...am your Angel
And I am going to
Break
..Your
....Heart
A contest entry
- Finish Strong by TabbyCat.
700 points, ended November 20, 2008, 62 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
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Comments
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I actually really liked this...the whole thing was strong in its seductive sweetness and its mysterious hidden agenda. Nicely done.
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