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Check Yes or No [a love note]

Heart struck , Love stuck, fucked up
My heart beat stumbles and my vision grows deem
Tho i see u in my "Heart Stuck haze"
its feels so real how can it be
I finally found the one for me
Maybe she'll say yes
but then again no ...
I'm "Love stuck here"
as i figure out the plan
If she says yes
It will be the Best
But if there's a no
My heart will only grow more cold
Ill be "fucked up" as you already know
But if it all works out
you and me will be
hand in hand  happy
But will it end ? = [


From:Kc
                              [ ]Yes                [ ] No  = [

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  • Ignis Corpus
    November 2, 2008

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    awwww I wish you the best of luck with this girl Casey. I hope all goes well. You deserve this girl if she's nice.