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Faithful

Brushing softly against your
head at night, love acts silently
in your dreams

Love becomes the most welcomed
visitor in your head; it makes you
engrave his name into your
once dormant heartbeat

Love makes music;
a melodious forte of two
heartbeats, entwining into
a beautiful symphony

Its journey is quiet and smooth
on the railways, passing by
so many memories captured
in black and white

& just when you think the darkness
would never end, you see other
stretches of road, telling you that
a happy ending is close by

Even if time shuns you into
disbelieving, love is a long and
faithful walk through the eyes
of your other half

Author notes

QUOTE:
Love is an endless journey of the two hearts...Unknown

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  • Sandi Alford gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    so true your conclusion, the sun doesn't always shine, a little rain must fall or the ground will become too parched to hold the roots

    Wonderfully penned verse of love. Congratulations on your winning entry!

    many blessings, sandi


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    Humm..indeed a smiling tone of the poetry is spereding over the words of your entry..this is really wonderful as its impact..well done...