Every moment
since you left
Your love left me lingering
thoughts laced with your fingers
Intertwined with words, promises
Helplessly I continue echoing reminders
like a mantra remaining attached to my heart
One melody leaving me caught, captured
lost in your spell of sweet innocence
And with one glance from your heart
sent me spinning endlessly
Waiting for your return
Author notes
Prompt is..... It is your love that I feel each day of my life.
A contest entry
- PIF 7 Prompts. by Riftkin.
850 points, ended November 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Another lovely write! You do this genre so well!
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I love the picture of "thoughts laced with your fingers, intertwined with words" -- definitely a strong loving attachment is there, whether the beloved is present or not. A very good and touching read!
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I love this very much, thank you for entering my contest.
Best of luck to you in it.
Riftkin
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