Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Nostalgic

Nostalgic days spent
On dreams and thoughts
Various dreams of years come and lost
Every day growing shorter
Many still yet to go
Before I can go home on break and
Eat my fill in order to
Recover from two months of cafeteria food

Author notes

I tried? I live in a dorm, the food in the dining center is horible, and I keep thinking of years past (a little explination for all those who are looking at me like I'm insane). Hope this isn't too bad.

A contest entry

No idea...

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • xeroabyss II
    September 1
    Edit | Reply
    Im always missing days that are gone for good, wish I had somewhere tangible to go back to.


  • poetrandy gold member
    November 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Very Cute!

    Excellent acrostic and YES, I know how bad "cafeteria" food can be! Good work!


  • Legend silver member
    November 9, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    May i wish you many happy returns to tables ladened with food you will enjoy.This piece had me feeling really sorry for your plight Good luck in the contest


  • ScarletO gold member
    November 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    You poor thing, lol. I can see food, good food, is really a focus on your mind.


  • Barbara gold member
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I've been in university and suffered through their food... so I offer you my sympathies. Good description here with a nice theme and feeling.

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.

1 - 5 of 5