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twinkle

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shooting star -
one last twinkle
in my eye

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Another in the series of death haiku..... a tradition of old masters......

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 11

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    the light of life was gone...famous from Teddy Roosevelt on the death of his infant daughter.was my thought here...PK