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Happy Thanksbirthday

Nullifying one of my childhood experiences
Over and over no friends for my party
Very busy and far away they were
Enjoying turkey and overstuffing
My birthdays were rarely spent as my day
Brittany's born on or around Thanksgiving
Ever so lovely the Fall month is
Relishing in and celebrating with the those offered, my family

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I tried, there you go I hope it's to your standards.

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  • Lowell Poe
    November 5, 2008

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    Thanksgiving was made because of your birthday,
    all those who see you golden smile are blessed and thankful.
    Look at it that way little gypsy.



    Irish blessings always lass,
    Liam
    [lowell poe]


  • Rock-Junkie
    November 2, 2008

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    this is really good chika!!
    maybe....... I can be with you on your bday this year. gotta make plans!! gotta think of what to get you that will make you love me EVEN more [lmao] by the way, how's the Fedora?! hehe
    great job!!


  • Barbara gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Having a birthday fall on a holiday is tough. (My daughter's is June 30, and in Canada, July 1 is Canada Day, and there's never anyone around for her party).
    You've described the emotions and feelings here very well. Nicely done.

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.