Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

It'll Be Better That Way.

Who will catch me when I fall?
I'm not afraid to tell anyone you are my all in all.
When you're with me,
It feels like no one can get me.

When you're gone,
It feels like I can't go on.
She couldn't love you at all like I do.
I love you for you and only you.

We can make things right again.
We can have like it was when we began.
Just give me one more shot.
You mean more than a lot.

We shared the greatest love.
We can make it through the push-n-shove.
Just trust me when I say.
It'll be better that way.

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Tristania
    November 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love it!It's lovely and true!I've felt that way about an ex of mine,but he wasn't smart enough to realize that though we had our problems in the past the future could be better!He left me for a younger girl and WHEN she changes her mind about him and breaks his heart,as all young people do because they're unsure of what they want and where they going in life,I will not be there for him to come crawling back to.If it works out the same with you and your guy just be happy...like your poem said,"It be better that way."There is a plan...a destiny that awaits you and if it doesn't work out with him just KNOW that your fate will be better without him,and the feelings will fade in time!


  • Midnight-Engaged
    November 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow, I think that this was beautiful! You really conveyed the emotion well. I loved your last stanze the best. You're very good at endings, I've seen.