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wishes and tears.

attraction is just your negatives
pulling at my positives,
hoping that the connection
will bring you more strength
to burn away the plastic lamination
hiding away the strings that connect
all the broken pieces of my heart.

I fell right through the cracks in the sidewalk
but I was still never skinny enough.

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  • letters to no one
    December 6, 2008
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    One word:

    WOW

    Magnificent


  • aanika
    November 9, 2008

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    more strength
    to burn away the plastic lamination
    hiding away the strings that connect
    all the broken pieces of my heart.

    I lovelovelove that.
    seriously wowwwww.
    you're amazing.


  • stasis
    November 1, 2008

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    Wow... this is absolutely brilliant. Wonderful take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    ♣ Tegan


  • written-in-ink
    November 1, 2008
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    wow

    i love ti

    amazing

    what are you talking about
    i love it

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