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You Are

~*~

You are my everything
my first waking thought
before my dreams do end
and the last before I sleep.

~*~

A contest entry

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    Ohhhh precious!!!

    I love this...it is beautiful! what love is in a nuts shell,

    Lovely write!!

    Rend


  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008

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    that is true love
    or is it infatuation
    i wouldn't know cause i am a virgin
    as a far as such matters go


  • Chelse-Oh
    November 1, 2008

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    Oh how sweet! I feel this too, for my boyfriend, and could totally relate. Well done and good luck in the contest.