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~ Bridging the Divide ~

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Devotion,

risibility,

exculpation ...


no hope is their more divine
bridging the expansive divide-
between bitter abhorrence;-
tendentiousness,

and immeasurable...

bliss.



~ Written for You By: ~ James Lee Long ~

Author notes

Picture credited to ... "Lights" by H.P. Kolb

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    when we rise above ourselves it is bliss
    beautiful done my friend...
    God bless you...


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Great write


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a nice write. I count 21 words...will reread at judging. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Jesann gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Lovely wording !!
    Well done


  • sheltered
    November 1, 2008

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    wow

    those last three lines put the icing
    on a cake of non-cliche-edness
    is "their" what you meant?
    it works i think
    very nicely worded

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