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Friends Forever

Option #3 - Children

Promise you'll be, my best friend forever
Come to my house and we'll play together
Legos, and dolls; bikes and play dough
Oh the memories we have, sleding in snow
Playing in mud, and chasing the frogs
Hide and go seek, and walking our dogs
Friends forever we'll always be
Best friends forever, that's you and me

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Contest Entry - Used option #3, photo of the 2 children

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  • hardluck
    November 2, 2008

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    Good poem,

    I think maybe you got a type-o in the line "and cashing the frogs." think maybe you ment chasing the frogs. But I don't kow what the exchange rate is on frogs, but the market is down right now. Great job, and good luck in the contest.


    • Kristine86
      November 3, 2008
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      thx!

      You're right, I did make a little type-o there! Thanks for catching that & bringing to my attention!
      Thanks for reading!