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Paradise Smiles.

Missing image
Paradise smiles-
Night falls.
Thunder rumbles...
Tide brawls.
Rock trials...
Sea walls.
Someone dials,
Shock befalls.
In denial...
I recall.

Author notes

Lush picture, but I can never get a poem to stay light for long.
Picture I used was this... "Lights" by H.P. Kolb.

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Great write and use of the picture and few words.


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A well composed piece. Good take off the picture prompt. Thank you for entering the contest. Nice work.
    Sam