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for sailing souls=======

Like a soul
searching for identity
and guiding the innocent
this light house
leads the path
for  all sailing souls

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A contest entry

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Great imagery


  • Samplette gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    A beautifully written piece of poetry. Nicely crafted. Thank you for entering the contest. Good work.
    Sam