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Sunset

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sunset
in the ocean...
ashes
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Another in a series of "death" haiku. These were a tradition by the earliest writers of haiku... but usually when they know they were going to die. I'm not planning on that... at least yet.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 21, 2008

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    Breathtaking!

    I'm stunned by the imagery! You just brought something to mind with the thought of ashes glowing. Did you know that diamonds can be made out of someones ashes & made into jewelery for loved one's to wear? How's that for a remembrance? Wonder if I can Ku that? Love this write. I'll have to think about composing some of these!


    • haikumonk gold member
      November 21, 2008

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      Thanks! Hey... give it a try. They're great to write while you're alive!!! LOLLLLL