A light house among the rocks,
floating above the sparkling waters.
Sun-setting clouds floating around.
A light from above shining down upon it.
Sea Gulls flying through the salty night mist,
singing an evening lullaby,
for it is night time on the ocean,
but tomorrow is another day.
A contest entry
- 20/20 by Samplette.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - a prewritten contest for everyone by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended March 1, 148 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nature poems by Midnight Breeze.
650 points, ended March 31, 9 entries
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What did you think
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Beautiful Imagery!! Thanks for entering the contest!!!
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What great imagery you have blended into this poem, lovely write, Sea Gulls flying through the salty night mist... Loved this line!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!
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Imagery is great, and it is alive with vivid pictures throughout..
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this is a beatuiful write, and it realy created a wonderful image of the sea and that lighthousel. I really enjoyed it. well done.
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Great write and imagery
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This is a nice write, but definitely more than 20 words. Will read again at judging. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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