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The Perfect Smile

I put a smile on this morning,
although it's upside down,
a smile should be showing
but it looks more like a frown.

I decided what to wear
from the wardrobe of my heart,
when I wear a sunshine yellow
happiness plays a part.

Sometimes I wear a sad blue
that welcomes in the gloom,
when I'm in that mood
I'd rather stay in my room.

There's no sense in spreading
anything besides cheer,
I hide for a good reason
when I am feeling fear.

A smile is the best to wear
even when I'm feeling blue,
I share a happy yellow
when I feel a smile that's true.

We can all wear the perfect smile
if we put it on just right,
a warm feeling to show off
that is contagious within sight.

Author notes

I dedicate this poem to Grunts Girl and Solitarytear.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 21, 2008

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    Well done on the flow and rhyme,
    i much enjoyed reading this coz i'm a big fan of rhyme myself

    All the best to you in the contest and thanks for the entry

    Ken

  • poetyaknoit
    November 13, 2008
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    well said! good use of colors and feelings!


  • solitarytear
    November 5, 2008
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    agrees

    it was a great write and yellow tends to send happiness around


  • Grunts Girl silver member
    November 1, 2008
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    aww i did like this a lot
    the bright yellow...
    so lovely