God
gazed
down upon
earth wanting to ensure
that his light
of love
and
hope
shone
for
one
and
all
Author notes
picture credit:- "Lights" by H.P. Kolb
"im getting in shape with Darkwell"
A contest entry
- 20/20 by Samplette.
400 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Get in Shape with Darkwell by Darkwell.
1700 points, ended January 31, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem, full of light - the heavens open and the clouds part and there ina moment is the swirl inside god's eyes.
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what a beautiful cross and its more like a traditional medieval one instead of like a crucifix one such a gorgeous message too about God watching over us. lovely
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Very nice Cross
Simple but elegant! Words that capture and bring forth a wonderful truth.
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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EXCELLENT
well done
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Ah..what a great thought is reaching through your small piece of the poetry..I am impressed and convey my thanks for such a wonderful poetry..well done...
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Fantastic.
I like how you wrote in a cross.
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Great words.
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Beautifully crafted concrete poem. Very nicely done. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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A Beautiful and Inspirational write, very fitting for such a beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Very well done....I enjoyed this!!!
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Very clever and uniquely inviting.
The message was great too ... LOL!
Blessings to you in this contest.
~ James ~ -
I hope
we need God's light now more the ever I think. But he has placed some of that light in your heart poet.
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