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Silly Thoughts

Heart drums
againts your presence
finding pleasures
awakening needs

tempest of passion's brewing

tastebud anticipating
on droplets of...

Hershey chocolate

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Ah, a chocolate lover eh?

    Well penned poet, and these few words speak volumes.


    All the best,
    mj.


  • sheltered
    November 2, 2008
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    if there's almonds in there beware
    i'm staring down an unopened bag right now


  • McCayleeAnn
    November 1, 2008
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    Gah. Lol. I'm a pervert. I TOTALLY took this in the wrong way.
    Keep Writing!
    McCaylee


  • docbill gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Very good!