Beauty
entwines
in
the
unconscious
mind
leaving
footsteps
behind
that
many
generations
follow
Author notes
Picture Credit -
http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489
Prompt ~ Pic Above 13 Words
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XV by PhantomsAngel87.
400 points, ended November 17, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow. This is so very lovely. I loved your take on the picture. Congratulations on the HM
Keep it flowing
Much love
Ylova
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interesting form and format. I apreciated the trailing rhyme. Congrats on the green.
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I am awed (not sure if that is a real word, if not I am making it one now
) reading this; I love the beauty and sadness you created so flawessly 
♥
Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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a very nice take on the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!
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Hey this is good...I like the first stanza...good luck
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a gem ...
like the look of the piece and the flow of the write ...
a unique way to express the timeless in 13 words.
thanks & good luck in the contest.
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What an excellent take on the pic-prompt,,,
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awww wonderul... have n words to express this was marvellous! nicley done and good luck!
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As A Member Of Todays Poem, I'd Like To Congradulate You For Being Featured....
I wonderfull written poem. I think you've captured a different side of the picture that others wouldn't have thought of. ☼ -
lovery hun, awesome take on the pic!
best of luck in the contest
Tasha
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Lovely wording! Great depth in just a few words!
best wishes in your contest.
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Wow, you said alot in so few words.
Excellent
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well written,
Beautiful flow, words that are meant, reality shown!
great Poem!
Rend
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Wow, what an excellent take on this
prompt my friend! All the best to you
with this entry and thanks a lot for
sharing your talent with us all here!
Jeremy0826
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Ooooooo....another great write from you. I like where you took this. Its in a way dark but is sheds light. Nice job. Good luck!
~Kystal Angel
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Today's Poem: 11/01/2008
I absolutely loved this poem. You did a great job, even the picture is fantastic.
Write on.
~*~SP
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A lovely poem, and the picture compliments it well.
Good luck in the contest, Hon
Granna
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Gorgeous poem..
And, so true!
Good luck in the contest!
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